Better BUT I had a heart palpation when I saw all that Open Unprotected Steel. A flash in my mind of what would happen if a piece of metal bridges that connect to (+) and the bracket etc... 1 oopsie Flash = 1 Bad Day.
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1) I would at minimum put heat shrink to cover the busbar from Fuse to Terminal. Also I would shorten the M8 Bolt so not so much thread is exposed. "Murphy Temptation".
2) Your Angle Bracket ! PLEASE TRIM THAT DOWN ! get rid of excess and really make sure it is all "soft edged" so nothing sharp...
Another Murphy Temptation".
Never EVER provide temptations / Invitations for Murphy to come and apply his laws onto you. Straight from the Lesson Learned pile of Crisis Management, Rule 1 being Prevent the crisis in the first place !