I thought of 3 things.
1
If I get a bad test result, I will usually test on a second machine and I will test accuracy of equipment with a fluke meter.
I read
usually as
maybe.
To me, that
feels vague. I think that part would resonate more robust if you just deleted
usually.
If I get a bad test result, I will test on a second machine and I will test accuracy of equipment with a fluke meter.
That assures the company that you definitely will test alternatives when you encounter a bad test result.
2
Time frames.
I understand there can be variations. Though I would try to specify those frames more than they are.
You could also add some thing along the lines
", if not mutually agreed upon" (/alternatively)
3
The overall language.
To me, the whole document feels mostly like "in layman terms/words". Many explanations. Also, I would completely refrain from
things you do not do. Just stick to "
these are things that both parties agree upon". Period. Your text feels definitely written by a human and not a robot. That could be positive. But just as well negative, because companies are used to deal with documents written by layers, and "not layer boring text" could be perceived as not fully professional. Maybe coin flip between those two?
The art of articulation is to say what needs to be said and only that.
I my self is horrible at exactly the above, but I strive to evolve. ^^