@Drizzt321 thank for catching the mistake. I've updated the diagram. I left the 2 set of 6mm2 from the 2 100/20 I had previously, now that I've got a single 100/30 like they suggested I'll have a single wire run of 10mm. Although the 6mm2 FLRY-B that I'll be using (available through a seller for automotive, marine flexible wires) is rated at 53A
https://www.elandcables.com/media/39716/flry-b-cables.pdf
These FLRY-B should be flexible enough and are available up to 25mm2 while the other H01N2-D which should be welding wire goes from 10-95mm2 so I'll use a combination of the two based on availability.
you'll max out the MPPT controller with both panels at maximum production
Yes, from
victron MPPT calculator I'll actually be limited both at low and max temp with a PV ratio of 102%.
I also updated the panels to the 450W instead of 440W since now that's the version available, which is better, but I can't get max output with a 100/30 having them in parallel.
My understanding is being flat on the roof of a camper they will never get 100% of the rating just because of the angle, unless when I'll go to the tropics

so I won't loose any production, but please let me know if I'm missing something.
My original plan was to get 2x 100/20, one for each panel, but since a 100/30 is the same weight, slightly smaller, less wires, less breaker and cheaper, I decided to follow the first suggestions I got here and put the panels in parallel. I'm not sure what advantage I'll get to put panels in series and go with a much more expensive 150/35, other than having less performance in case of partial shading.
For the Orion XS 12-24, have they said what the max output will be?
It just popped up on a few sellers and they updated the manual and data sheet
https://www.victronenergy.com/upload/documents/Datasheet-Orion-XS-DC-DC-battery-charger-EN-.pdf I'm still not sure, but from reading I understand it's 50A max input and output, so if I connect to a 12V battery it will max out on the input at 50A so I'll get 25A output, still a better than the old 12-24 15A. The 6mm2 wire rated at 53A is probably fine, but I can go with a 10mm no problem, such a short run.
Isn't the pre-charge circuit usually done at the inverter?
Yes, but when testing the battery the first time, I actually had some sparks just plugging the bench power supply (probably has some capacitors), so I thought I might as well put the precharge switch as the main, it won't hurt.
Does the inverter need to be "on" when the DC is connected in order to charge the capacitor?
The inverter has the option for a remote on-of switch as explained in the manual you shared, but it won't disconnect the inverter, so the capacitors will stay charged. The same way they instantly charge when you connect them if the inverter is off. That's my understanding but I'm not sure. I don't think everyone that has a precharge switch is turning that on and off to turn the inverter on-off.
In the event I need to physically disconnect it, (probably a few times during the install) I'll switch the entire battery off so I don't have to worry about accidental shorts when doing stuff.
or the inverter wiring, interesting, the manual (I think this is the right one
https://www.meanwell.com/Upload/PDF/NTS,NTU-E.pdf) has 100-125a as 35mm2, which is what you note, but according to
https://www.rapidtables.com/calc/wire/awg-to-mm.html that's 35mm2 is slightly larger than 2awg, yet it calls for 1awg/35mm2 in the manual. Probably fine I'd say, just an odd discrepancy of calculation between sources.
Didn't even see that discrepancy to be hones. I based my wire calculation using this app:
https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=it.Ettore.calcolielettrici&hl=en it's pretty well made and has all the IEC, NEC codes, considers many methods of installation, probably even overkill, but I based on that and the rated ampacity of the types of cable I'm using. For example for 150A at 24V open air install with PVC insulation (my wires are rated at 85°c instead of the usual 70) gives me 35mm2 that has an ampacity of 162A, since I have a 150A fuse it should be fine. H01N2-D welding cables spec sheets quote 180A continuous rating for a 35mm2.